Where will You Enjoy a Cherry Blossom Festival?
When do you think spring really come? Personally, when cherry blossom starts to bloom, I consider as spring really starts. My high school had cherry blossom festival at school every year with a firework and a lot of people came and enjoyed the spring with Cherry Blossom. I haven't been to other Cherry Blossom Festivals. So, from now on, I will talk about the most famous Festival in Korea. From South to North, there are several famous cherry blossom festivals, such as in Yeouido, Jinhea and Jeju city.
In Jeju city, which is located in southern part of Korea, the festival starts at early April or late March every year. It is called 'Wang Cherry Blossom Festival'. Since their Cherry blossom trees have especially bigger petals, it has a name as a 'Wang' which means King or Big in Korean. When you have a chance to go to Jeju Island in spring, you can enjoy cherry blossom festival earlier than others in Korea.
Also, in Jinhea, where Marine Academy is located, Festival called Gunhang Festival was held for over 50 years around late March or early April. The name of festival is derived from Marine headquarters' location. Since, the festival is held around Marine Academy, you can also look around the Marine academy during the Festival. And there are lots of historical sites in Jinhea. Therefore, you might learn about Korean History as well as enjoy the festival itself.
Lastly, but most crowded cherry blossom festival is Yeouido cherry blossom festival. This feast is held in Yeouido Park around the middle of April every year. Since it is located in Seoul, during the feast, colossal number of people come and go to feel the spring. And in Yeouido festival, it is famous for its firework at night. With your friends or family, it will mean more to you.
Even though, I haven't been to any of this festival in my life, I will try to experience one in Yeouido this year. And from now on, I will try to check the differences from festivals to festivals. Since these 3 festivals are the most popular one, when you think about attending in cherry blossom festival, consider these festivals and enjoy the spring with cherry blossom.
The essay has a thesis statement:"From South to North, there are several famous cherry blossom festivals, such as in Yeouido, Jinhea and Jeju city."
ReplyDeleteBackground information: "I haven't been to other Cherry Blossom Festivals. So, from now on, I will talk about the most famous Festival in Korea. "
Each paragraph presents a different part of the process.
The parts are ognized in a logical way but the article was ognized to show different festivals, not to show the process of one festival.
The conclusion is more likely a evaluation.