How to enjoy Cherry-blossoms Festival
The weather is getting warm, and the color of the street is getting brighter and cozy. Now, it is time to welcome the spring, one of my favorite season. The biggest reason why I love spring is because of how the color of the street turn pinky when the cherry-blossoms is in full bloom. I have three ways to fully enjoy the lovely atmosphere of the cherry-blossoms viewing
First, try to find a partner who you could spend time with bit of thrill. It could be your best friends, but try to choose opposite sex. Your lover will be great, however the best partner will be the person who you are trying to have relationship with. If you walk through the street where the cherry-blossoms is fluttering, that romantic atmosphere will make the distance of you and your partner closer and deeper. How could you not tell that this is the best chance to move on?
Second, have a special cherry-blossoms edition drink with you while enjoying the festival. Your five senses can be satisfied. I would like to recommend you to try Starbucks drink called 'Cherry-blossoms Café-latte'. You can taste the sweet flavor of the cherry-blossoms with smooth milk bubble.
Finally, have a picnic time right under the Cherry-blossoms tree. You will feel like you are in your private place as the tree blocks the sunlight and the heat. Get wet in the cherry-blossoms shower. Have some kind of secret conversation with your partner by having delicious food and some wine. Trust me, the picnic is the best time to know about each other. Don't forget that if the cherry-blossoms falls in to your hand, it means your love will be fulfilled.
I just can't wait to feel the great charm of cherry blossoms. The smell, color, and the view just blows my heart with romance. However, as I have a boyfriend who I've been dating for a long time, I would try to find out the way to enjoy the festival energetically. We have done too much of static date. But the sign of the spring is engough to make my heart beat
From : Sujin Park
ReplyDeleteWith : Editor's Checklist on page 47
1. (Thesis Statement) Yes. The thesis statement is the last sentence of the first paragraph, 'I have three ways to fully enjoy the lovely atmosphere of the cherry-blossoms viewing'.
2. (Background Info.) The writer likes spring the most because of the beautiful bloom of cherry-blossoms. The season of cherry-blossoms is coming up soon.
3. (Different Part of the Process) Yes.
4. (List the Sequence) First, find a parner to enjoy with. Then, it would be great to have some drinks while walking streets with cherry-blossoms. Finally, have a picnic time under one of the cherry-blossom trees with foods and conversations.
5. (Any facts, definitions, or details) The writer recommended specific name of a drink.
(Any Insufficient Details) There is not.
6. (Conclusion) The writer gives her own expetations and impressions about the cherry-blossom season.
From Youngkyung Ko to Chongrim Yoo
ReplyDelete1. Thesis is "I have three ways to fully enjoy the lovely atmosphere of the cherry-blossoms viewing".
2. The back ground information is color of the street is getting brighter and cozy, and color of the street turn pinky when the cherry-blossoms is in full bloom.
3. Yes it is.
4. First, try to find a partner who you could spend time with bit of thrill. Next, have a special cherry-blossoms edition drink with you while enjoying the festival. And finally, have a picnic time right under the Cherry-blossoms tree.
5. There are full of details of festival. Especially writer stated specific name of a drink. Like this, the writing is not insuccifient.
6. In conclusion, writer stated own expectations of the festival and spring. Writer just arranged his or her own thinking. So if writer add some evaluation of the festival, the writing could be more organized.