The reason we should admit intellectual property as real property.
If you have invented something, you owned it, but it is being old story. Unlike the physical properties, many people can use the innovation at the same time. Furthermore, it is not easy job to find out who think the idea firstly. So, the argument regarding intellectual property is continuing recently. For one case, seeing big fight between Samsung and Apple, we could call it another 'war' following billion dollars. Even though except this, we can see many conflicts around us because of intellectual property. To prevent these conflicts, we should admit intellectual property as real property.
Intellectual property should be regarded as real property. First of all, it is also result of hard working. We couldn't make something if we couldn't think that something consciously. It's really unfair if someone invents something great but deprived by others. Of course, when it comes to intellectual property, the inventor could still have the idea if somebody uses it for free. But in that he invests his time, it still theft to use his idea without inventor's approval.
And, intellectual property has value as exchange in market. Anyone could buy or sell his or her idea in market for money or other ideas. For example, if you make a smart phone game, you can enroll it on google stores for others to buy it. You can measure your ideas by yourself. If you measure your idea higher than others think, then it wouldn't be sold, If you measure your idea lower than others think, then it would be popular. The idea has worth as itself, so intellectual property should be regarded as real property.
Finally, embracing intellectual property as real property develops society for people to do intellectual society more often. No one wants to work without wage. It could apply in intellectual property market similarly. If someone's ideas are used for free, no one will make ideas investing his time. When the ideas are treated fairly, people will make more ideas. In addition, ideas are really important because our generation is living in information-oriented age.
We could think it is small thing to download movies or music by torrent. But you should think whenever you use torrent you steal others ideas and their time, hinder markets function, and discourage others to make ideas. Of course, you won't be someone like that. Then just act accord with what you think. Treat intellectual property rightly, then you could be also good modern citizen.
To; Unbae Kwon
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1. yes it has five paragraphs.
2.The writer argues that intellectual property should be admitted as real property.
3.Yes.
4.I think you tried to add a counter argument in the first body paragraph, but I don't see any rebuts. Rebutting can make the essay stronger.
5.Yes they do.
6. People should treat intellectual property as a real one.
It was really clear writing. Also you have subtitle that which really suits the wriitng. I aslo agree with your idea of accepting the intellectual property. That's why your last sentence 'you could be also good modern citizen' that's looks very good to me. you seperate your paragraphs well-balanced. It is wonderful writing but there are some things that you should be fixed. First, I think your hook is little bit weak that you need more fascinating hook. Also the end, it is good that you use what is happening in real world but it would be better if you conclude all three paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteThe reason we should admit intellectual property as real property.
ReplyDeleteIf you have invented something, you owned it, but it is being old story. Unlike the physical properties, many people can use the innovation at the same time. Furthermore, it is not easy job to find out who think the idea firstly. So, the argument regarding intellectual property is continuing recently. For one case, seeing big fight between Samsung and Apple, we could call it another 'war' following billion dollars. Even though except this, we can see many conflicts around us because of intellectual property. To prevent these conflicts, we should admit intellectual property as real property.
Intellectual property should be regarded as real property. First of all, it is also result of hard working. We couldn't make something if we couldn't think that something consciously. It's really unfair if someone invents something great but deprived by others. Of course, when it comes to intellectual property, the inventor could still have the idea if somebody uses it for free. But in that he invests his time, it still theft to use his idea without inventor's approval.
And, intellectual property has value as exchange in market. Anyone could buy or sell his or her idea in market for money or other ideas. For example, if you make a smart phone game, you can enroll it on google stores for others to buy it. You can measure your ideas by yourself. If you measure your idea higher than others think, then it wouldn't be sold, If you measure your idea lower than others think, then it would be popular. The idea has worth as itself, so intellectual property should be regarded as real property.
Finally, embracing intellectual property as real property develops society for people to do intellectual society more often. No one wants to work without wage. It could apply in intellectual property market similarly. If someone's ideas are used for free, no one will make ideas investing his time. When the ideas are treated fairly, people will make more ideas. In addition, ideas are really important because our generation is living in information-oriented age.
We could think it is small thing to download movies or music by torrent. But you should think whenever you use torrent you steal others ideas and their time, hinder markets function, and discourage others to make ideas. Of course, you won't be someone like that. Then just act accord with what you think. Treat intellectual property rightly, then you could be also good modern citizen.